Fear's Forums

As you may have noticed, I'm in the process of touching up some of the older comics. Mainly for two reasons, the first is to remove some continuity errors as I wasn't expecting to create my own story a year ago when making them and secondly to make them more readable by adding text bubbles and using bigger font. The first two were also missing my logo originally.

I'm also changing a bit of the writing to remove some of the inside jokes. I kept looking at the first FMS for example and kept saying to myself "this doesn't make sense to anyone except maybe a few people on this earth." I don't mind keeping some of the more subtle inside jokes as a nod to the players who inspired this but I can't leave a whole comic revolve around a joke only a handful would find funny. (don't worry, Herb is there to stay).

I'm guessing some of you may prefer the originals and some will like the newer versions.

I'd be interested in hearing your feedback.

For fun, I'm linking the original FMS with the newer one for comparison

http://www.fearstavern.com/series/fearMS1.png
http://www.fearstavern.com/series/fearMS1redone.png

*note, just noticed some typos in some...i'll get around to correcting those too..

I would suggest keeping bat country in it, it be a fear thing.... Also no logos on the sheilds of omega!

bat country might re-appear as a tribute to the book that spawned the idea of the tribe FEAR but otherwise it isn't really a FEAR thing.

That was one of the inconsistencies...those troops aren't omega...

It's not that the inside jokes are hard to understand, and make no sense, it's that they're not funny from a 3rd party's point of view.

At least you removed the OMEGA symbols from everything.