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That doesn't even make sense. More like too much set up, not enough set.

Either way, the pre-adventure seems to be taking on a style that I don't see translating into the type of story you're planning on the rest of it being. I think you know what I mean. Unless of course he'll be traveling *with* his master, but I don't see that working out positively.
There, chapter one done!!!

The only thing I'm debating now is whether to continue from writing as is or like a journal that Gronk writes as he continues his adventures.

Going to have to reset up the thread here I think, if I'm going to keep chapters seperate...
I guess I should go ahead and get started on chapter 2 now...
BAM! Update. Bet you guys weren't expecting that, while the adventure story was going on. This is the best update ever! Read and be amused. I was chuckling a bit to myself just writing it.
Ill take a look this weekend when i have a little more time.
starting to collection around the field.

should be

starting to collect around the field.

Good stuff, chimps+poo.
Fixed.
shouldn't you be using your spare time to be designing me something....? Tongue
I'm waiting on your guy to email me back. You want to speed that up, get on the horn. Tongue

I should hear from him tomorrow I think, and can go from there.
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